Raw Tides of Forbidden Hunger
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Chapter 1: Salt-Stung Wounds 🔥
The steam from the outdoor shower curled up like ghosts in the salty Spanish breeze, mingling with the crash of waves against the cliffs below our villa suite. I stood there, letting the hot spray hammer my shoulders, trying to rinse away the chaos of last night. Elena—my mom—had clawed my back raw during that frenzy, her nails carving lines of fire across my skin. It stung now, a sharp reminder of how I’d crossed every line imaginable.
Guilt gnawed at me, but underneath it simmered something hotter, more primal. I’d mistaken her for Sophia at first, that sultry older woman I’d met in the resort bar, but somewhere in the haze of lust, I’d known. And I hadn’t stopped. Hell, I’d thrust deeper, chasing that electric grip of her around me. Best fuck of my life, no question. Her moans echoing in my skull, the way her body arched like a wave about to break.
I twisted under the water, wincing as it hit the scratches. Why’d she go so feral? Not that I minded in the moment—those marks felt like badges of the raw hunger we’d unleashed. But now? I needed to cover them before anyone noticed. Toweling off roughly, I yanked on boxers and loose linen pants, the fabric whispering against tender skin.
“Elena!” I called toward her room in the villa, voice echoing off terracotta walls. “Got anything for these claw marks?”
She appeared moments later, hair tousled, slipping into a sundress that hugged her curves in ways I’d never let myself notice before. Mid-forties, yoga-toned, with sun-kissed skin and those piercing green eyes. “Claw marks? Oh god, Jake…” Her hand flew to her mouth, then gently to my shoulder as I turned.
Her touch was feather-light, tracing the red welts. I flinched, breath hitching—not just from pain, but the spark it ignited low in my gut.
“I’m sorry, baby. I lost control. Here, let me fix it.” She fetched some aloe from the bathroom, her fingers cool and soothing as she dabbed it on. Each stroke sent shivers down my spine, her breath warm on my neck, scented with hibiscus tea.
“It didn’t hurt then,” I muttered, voice thick. “Felt… intense.”
She paused, her laugh low and throaty. “Yeah. The moment had us both raw, didn’t it?” Her fingers lingered, massaging deeper, blurring the line between care and caress.
We stayed like that, silence thick with unspoken heat, the ocean’s roar our only witness. By the time she finished, my pulse thrummed, cock twitching against my pants. This was wrong. But damn if it didn’t feel alive.
Chapter 2: Echoes Over Paella 💋
Room service arrived with platters of paella steaming under the villa’s shaded pergola, saffron rice mingling with the briny scent of sea mussels. Elena pored over her conference tablet, legs crossed, bare feet brushing mine under the table. I couldn’t stop staring—her auburn waves cascading longer than Sophia’s platinum bob, her sharper jawline, fuller lips. How had I confused them? Builds similar, sure, both athletic in that effortless way, but Elena’s touch… softer, more knowing.
Sophia had been all fire and demand during our bar flirtation yesterday, her hands rough on my thighs as we talked travel dreams. But Elena? Her fingers on my back earlier had caressed like silk over stone.
“Earth to Jake,” she said, glancing up, fork pausing mid-air. “What’s got you zoning?”
“Just… replaying how I could’ve mixed you up with her. Sophia.”
Her fork clinked against the plate. “You wanted it to be her. Easy mistake in the dark.”
I shoveled paella, the garlic and lemon bursting on my tongue, but my mind wandered back. We’d stumbled into her room—thought it was hers—wine on her breath, bodies crashing. I’d pinned her, tasted salt on her neck, plunged into that slick heat without a second thought. When realization hit, mid-thrust, her eyes locked on mine, wide but unresisting. And I kept going, raw need overriding everything.
Elena watched me now, her own fork idle. Beautiful, yeah. Always had been, but she’d been “Mom”—supplier of advice, condoms in high school, celebratory gelato after my first time. Progressive, chill, never the hovering type. We’d negotiated life like partners. No wonder his sex life had been wild; she’d turned a blind eye to girls in my room, smirking knowingly.
And me? I’d smirked back on nights her lovers stayed over, catching her post-glow. Like this morning. Now I knew why.
“You’re staring again,” she teased, but her cheeks flushed under the olive tone.
“Can’t help it. You’re… stunning.”
She blinked, then looked away, waves crashing louder in the sudden hush. Tension coiled between us, thick as the humid air.
A Flash of Memory
Flashback hit like a rogue wave: her room last night, sheets tangled, wine spilled crimson on silk. Drawer ajar with her vibe tossed in—rabbit style, well-used. Had she been edging before I burst in? Grinning despite myself, I shook it off. Shouldn’t think of Mom that way. But the raw ecstasy of her clenching around me… unmatched.
“Jake?” Her voice pulled me back. “Conference calls. But tonight… stay in?”
I nodded, heat building. This wasn’t over.
Chapter 3: Vanished Flames and Sea Confessions
Sophia wasn’t at the resort’s cliffside bar or infinity pool. No trace in the spa lounge with its eucalyptus haze. I didn’t even know her suite number—our chats had danced around her life, her real estate whispers vague amid Europe tales and my engineering gripes.
Desk clerk, bronzed and efficient, checked her system. “Señorita Reyes checked out hours ago.”
Reyes? Married? Nah. She slid an envelope. “For you, Jake Harlan.”
Her script swirled: Dearest Jake, that raw spark we shared lingers like Spanish sun on skin. Heading to Barcelona early—deals await. Cherish our night; may vacations twist fate again. Besos, Sophia.
I folded it, gut twisting. One-night blaze extinguished. But mine burned brighter elsewhere.
New scene unfolded as I wandered the private beach, sand gritty underfoot, gulls screeching overhead. Salt spray stung my scratches through my shirt. Sat on driftwood, mind looping: Elena’s taste, musky-sweet; her gasps like ocean sighs; that vise of her pulsing. Guilt? Fading fast. She’d raised me equal, not fragile. Her glow this morning screamed satisfaction. I’d wrecked her world—in the best way.
Footsteps crunched. Elena, sundress billowing, worry etching her face. Clouds gathered, beach empty save us.
“Back okay?” she asked, sitting close, thigh brushing mine.
“Healing. You?”
She exhaled. “Worried you’re… messed up.”
I chuckled. “Screwed? Yeah. Fucked up? Nah.”
She mirrored the smirk. “Same.” Blush crept up. “God, the words…” Laugh bubbled out, raw and real, tears glistening.
I pulled her close, her head on my shoulder, lavender shampoo mixing with sea salt. “You’re my everything,” she whispered. “Even if we’re both a little twisted now.”
“Love you, Elena.”
We lingered, hearts syncing with the tide.
Chapter 4: Shadows Lengthen, Desires Ignite
Back in the villa, sunset bled orange across the horizon, painting her skin gold as she prepped dinner—grilled octopus, olive oil sizzling, herbs sharp in the air. I watched from the terrace, book forgotten, cock stirring at her sway.
“Sophia bailed,” I said, joining her at the table.
“Ships in the night?” Sad smile. Then firmer: “Last night… mistake, but done.”
“Can’t unspill the wine,” I echoed her earlier logic.
“Exactly. No pregnancy risk—tubes tied years ago. You’re grown. No trauma?”
“Hell no. You?”
“Shaken, but…” She leaned in, eyes dark. “Alive. What about us?”
“Changes nothing unless we want. Sex isn’t love.”
“But I love you.”
“As son. Me too. Romantically? Nah. Just… hunger.”
She grinned, Freud joke landing light. “Equals, right? Been that way forever.”
“So… again?” Bold, heart pounding.
Her eyes widened, then hooded. “Thought you’d never ask.”
New beat: We cleared plates slow, touches lingering—her hand on my wrist, pulse racing. Atmosphere thickened, candles flickering, sea whispering promises.
The Massage That Broke Dams
“Your back,” she murmured. I stripped shirtless on the bed, prone, her oiled hands gliding over welts. Pain melted to pleasure, thumbs circling knots, dipping lower. My groan escaped, raw edge to it.
She straddled my thighs, weight delicious, breath hot on my ear. “Feel good?”
“Too good.” Flipped sudden, her gasp fueling me. Kissed her fierce, tongues tangling salt and wine. Her dress hiked, no panties—slick folds greeting my fingers.
“Jake… yes.” Crude whisper: “Fuck me raw, like last night.”
I did. Cock slamming home, her walls clenching greedy. She bucked, nails lighter this time, but urgency brutal. Sweat-slick, grunts mixing with waves crashing outside. Her climax hit like thunder, milking me dry, hot spurts filling her.
Collapsed tangled, breaths ragged, her tracing my chest. Vulnerability bloomed—tears on her cheek. “This binds us deeper.”
“Good kind of raw,” I whispered, holding tight.
Chapter 5: Depths Explored
Morning light filtered through shutters, her body curled into mine, skin sticky from night sweats. We’d gone slow after dinner frenzy—exploring every inch. Her mouth on me, tongue swirling head, taking deep till gagging softly. Salty pre-cum her reward.
I’d devoured her, face buried in that drenched pussy, clit throbbing under laps, her thighs quaking. Fingers curled inside, hitting that spot till she squirted, tangy flood on my chin.
Now, awake, tension rebuilt. She stirred, hand finding my hardness. “Again?” Voice husky.
New scene: Balcony sex. Pushed her against railing, skirt flipped, entering from behind. Ocean view vast, but world narrowed to her moans, ass cheeks rippling with each pound. Wind whipped hair, her cries carried on breeze.
“Harder! Raw, baby—give it raw!” Nails dug anew, lighter scratches blooming.
I gripped hips, slamming, balls slapping wet. Pulled hair gentle, arching her. Climax synced—her spasming, my roar lost in surf.
After, lounging nude, sangria cooling palms. Emotional dip: “Society says hell, but feels right.”
“Our secret,” she agreed, lips brushing mine. 💋
Chapter 6: Tides of New Dawn 🔥
Conference wrapped, but we lingered extra day. New conflict: Guilt flickered during beach walk, her hand in mine like lovers. “What if Dad suspects?” He was ex, distant, but shadow loomed.
“He doesn’t know our raw truth.”
Afternoon storm hit, rain sheeting glass doors. We fucked through it—lazy at first, her riding slow, breasts swaying hypnotic. Built frantic: me on top, legs over shoulders, deep as bone. Vulgar pleas: “Pound my cunt, son—fill Mom’s greedy hole!”
Senses overload: Rain’s drum, ozone tang, her sweat-salt taste, velvet grip, visual feast of flushed skin.
Post-storm, exhaustion sweet. Cuddled, processing: “Changes everything, nothing. Deeper bond.”
“Paris next? Keep this fire?”
She smiled wicked. “Raw hunger eternal.”
We packed reluctant, hearts fused in forbidden blaze. Tides pulled, but we’d return—inevitable as waves.
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